http://m-i-su.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] m-i-su.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] borkhers 2007-08-31 12:45 pm (UTC)

Да. Но... мешают все эти "который", "где" и прочие придаточные мостики - не только здесь, а и в других вещах. Это придает стихам натужность письма И.И.Обломова, а они должны быть воздушны.
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