http://ligrin.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ligrin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] borkhers 2012-07-03 11:46 pm (UTC)

Замечательно, Боря! Спасибо!
Во второй строфе, может быть, не "пересекается", а "пресекается"?
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